Understand the Boy's Problems - Counterpoint of Debate on Mystic Horse

The story Mystic Horse talks about a boy and his grandma who are really poor. One day, he found a weak horse. He thinks that this horse can be his first horse. So, he pet it. And the horse becomes his pet. And one day, they found an enemy. Everyone wants to fight the enemy, but the boy is really weak and can’t fight enemies. This made the boy feel really sad. He wants to fight. Then, his horse spoked, and the horse told him to do several weird things. and after he did all those things, he went against the horse’s warning and the horse died. But at last, the horse got forgiven and he came back to life. I think that the boy does have some problems. 

  The boy needs to learn to control himself. We always need to learn to control ourselves. Otherwise there might be really serious consequences. We might go crazy. And it can harm others a lot. In the story, the boy didn’t control his excitement. He went on strike 5 times. Then, it leads to a very serious consequence. The horse died because of that. If the god didn’t forgive them, then the horse will die forever. So, the boy needs to learn to control himself. Without controlling himself, the consequence is really serious. The boy gets too excited. He wants to strike more than 4 times. But we need to learn to think on the bigger view. The bigger view is the death of the horse.  We need to control ourselves. 

  He doesn’t listen to warning, he doesn’t trust them. Warnings from others might be really important. We need to listen to warnings from other. We need to pay attention to it, it might save us from serious problems. In the story, the horse warned the boy about striking more than 4 times. But the boy doesn’t care. He thinks that it is not important. He doesn’t think that this is a important warning. He thinks that it is nothing. He thinks that nothing will happen if he striked more than 4 times. The horsed died because the boy didn’t listen to the warnings. the warnings might save the boy’s best friend, the horse.  In conclusion, we need to listen to others' warnings, otherwise it might cause serious problems.  

  Trust is really important, but the boy didn’t trust the horse. We need to trust others. Even though it is not everyone that we can trust, we do need to have trust. We can’t just think that we are not trusting anyone. In the story, the boy didn’t trust the horse when he said that a strike more than 4 times might lead to serious results. But the boy didn’t trust the horse. He chose to satisfy himself instead of trusting the horse. We might not trust a new friend, but the horse told the boy to do all those things before. He already tells the boy that he can be trusted. But the boy still didn’t believe in him. 

  In conclusion, I believe that the boy has some problems. He needs to learn to control themselves. Controlling is a really important part of our life. Things are only good with the right amount. If we do a thing too much, it might be really harmful for us. So, we need to control ourselves. We need to try to find the ideal amount. We also need to listen to other people’s warning. When we hear warning, don’t just ignore it. we need to think of it. It might save us, or save people near us. So, warning is really important. Trust is also pretty important. We need to trust others. And we need to be honest. Trusting others might save our lives. It might be really useful for us. We need to trust others. We might not trust new friends, but we need to trust friends who are really near us.